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		<title>Comment on Atlas Shrugged Part I (A review) by Ed F Bias</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed F Bias</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Apr 2011 02:33:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;A comment from viewer &quot;Mr. Fridge&quot;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt;

Nice review…I think the points you mention catch the jist of what didn’t feel right about the movie.
 
I was reviewing with a co-worker the movie and here is what I basically narrowed it down too:
-          Slow down the acting with 3-4 major  scenes and REALLY explore the dialogue

-          I am not a director but I love it when the scene is punctuated with dramatic pause and strong visual acting: as done in the Godfather when at the end of the movie you see Kay standing in the house packing items and several men go to meet Michael Corleone and kiss his ring as his body guard slowly closes the door while Michael looks through to Kay as the door closes…that was an incredibly powerful scene. This book DESERVES those kind of scenes;

o   The court room where Hank has the decision handed down, need to show the courts are a part of the pillaging.

o   The dinner scene with the parasites should have been a 10 minute minimum scene.

o   The  non-deserving liberal/crony agent getting his folder from Hank with the title to the business; while showing complete contempt from the man he is stealing from, they could have really worked that scene better, add the dialog of the smugness of the self righteous thieves

o   The scene with the head scientist and his complete compromise to keep his job and not his ideals was a major flaw. The speech about his most 3 brilliant students was glossed over so fast that it could barely be noticed…that was a major let down.

-          I agree with Francisco needing to be presented with more depth, scenes from his youth when they all hung out together (Dagny, James and Francisco) and his lust for life and success needed to be developed to really understand what a buffoon he portrayed in the current movie. They did that in the Godfather 2 with perfection

All this bad critiquing is making me pissed now that I write it…This movie can be an epic, instead it is looking more like a made for Hallmark TV series!!!!!!!!!  Damnit, get Francis Ford Cupola on the phone!!!!!!!!!!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i><b>A comment from viewer &#8220;Mr. Fridge&#8221;</b></i></p>
<p>Nice review…I think the points you mention catch the jist of what didn’t feel right about the movie.</p>
<p>I was reviewing with a co-worker the movie and here is what I basically narrowed it down too:<br />
-          Slow down the acting with 3-4 major  scenes and REALLY explore the dialogue</p>
<p>-          I am not a director but I love it when the scene is punctuated with dramatic pause and strong visual acting: as done in the Godfather when at the end of the movie you see Kay standing in the house packing items and several men go to meet Michael Corleone and kiss his ring as his body guard slowly closes the door while Michael looks through to Kay as the door closes…that was an incredibly powerful scene. This book DESERVES those kind of scenes;</p>
<p>o   The court room where Hank has the decision handed down, need to show the courts are a part of the pillaging.</p>
<p>o   The dinner scene with the parasites should have been a 10 minute minimum scene.</p>
<p>o   The  non-deserving liberal/crony agent getting his folder from Hank with the title to the business; while showing complete contempt from the man he is stealing from, they could have really worked that scene better, add the dialog of the smugness of the self righteous thieves</p>
<p>o   The scene with the head scientist and his complete compromise to keep his job and not his ideals was a major flaw. The speech about his most 3 brilliant students was glossed over so fast that it could barely be noticed…that was a major let down.</p>
<p>-          I agree with Francisco needing to be presented with more depth, scenes from his youth when they all hung out together (Dagny, James and Francisco) and his lust for life and success needed to be developed to really understand what a buffoon he portrayed in the current movie. They did that in the Godfather 2 with perfection</p>
<p>All this bad critiquing is making me pissed now that I write it…This movie can be an epic, instead it is looking more like a made for Hallmark TV series!!!!!!!!!  Damnit, get Francis Ford Cupola on the phone!!!!!!!!!!!!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Arizona Shooting: More proof the media has lost control. by Ed F Bias</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed F Bias</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 11 Jan 2011 17:51:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stu (from Glenn Beck) has an interesting take.  &quot;This has nothing to do with political discourse.&quot;   &quot;There is not there there.&quot;

http://www.glennbeck.com/content/blog/stu/the-one-thing-the-media-can%E2%80%99t-stand-to-tell-you-about-gabrielle-giffords/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stu (from Glenn Beck) has an interesting take.  &#8220;This has nothing to do with political discourse.&#8221;   &#8220;There is not there there.&#8221;</p>
<p><a href="http://www.glennbeck.com/content/blog/stu/the-one-thing-the-media-can%E2%80%99t-stand-to-tell-you-about-gabrielle-giffords/" rel="nofollow">http://www.glennbeck.com/content/blog/stu/the-one-thing-the-media-can%E2%80%99t-stand-to-tell-you-about-gabrielle-giffords/</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on UK a harbinger of US future? by Carlos Kelly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carlos Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Dec 2010 19:09:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>there are many social issues these days and we have different solutions for different social problems `;:</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>there are many social issues these days and we have different solutions for different social problems `;:</p>
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		<title>Comment on UK a harbinger of US future? by Driving Lights </title>
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		<dc:creator>Driving Lights </dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Dec 2010 18:12:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i think that gun control is a must because more guns means more deaths :,&#039;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i think that gun control is a must because more guns means more deaths :,&#8217;</p>
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		<title>Comment on There are NO Communists left in America! by Tiesha Boisclair</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tiesha Boisclair</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Dec 2010 16:31:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There is obviously a great deal to realize about this.  I suppose you made some nice points in features also.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There is obviously a great deal to realize about this.  I suppose you made some nice points in features also.</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Experts&#8221; still surprised at economy&#8230;John Galt was not by Faith Simmons</title>
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		<dc:creator>Faith Simmons</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Oct 2010 17:00:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>the unemployment rate on our country is growing bigger and bigger due to government mismanagement..,</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>the unemployment rate on our country is growing bigger and bigger due to government mismanagement..,</p>
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		<title>Comment on &#8220;Experts&#8221; still surprised at economy&#8230;John Galt was not by Gene Foxx</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gene Foxx</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Sep 2010 22:07:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Invalid Tax Theory Abounds by www.editedforbias.com &#187; NY Times bias on display</title>
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		<dc:creator>www.editedforbias.com &#187; NY Times bias on display</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Sep 2010 15:28:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] that is not the worst of it, the fact is that the tax cuts increased jobs and amounted to over 1.5 Trillion more dollars of tax revenue to the federal government over the [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] that is not the worst of it, the fact is that the tax cuts increased jobs and amounted to over 1.5 Trillion more dollars of tax revenue to the federal government over the [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on A review from DC&#8217;s Restoring Honor Rally by Ed F Bias</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed F Bias</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Sep 2010 14:10:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A great article explaining the rally; and of out Chicago no less!

http://chicagoboyz.net/archives/15295.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A great article explaining the rally; and of out Chicago no less!</p>
<p><a href="http://chicagoboyz.net/archives/15295.html" rel="nofollow">http://chicagoboyz.net/archives/15295.html</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Ten anecdotes from DC 8/27-8/28 by Ed F Bias</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed F Bias</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Aug 2010 16:57:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A great article from the WSJ that covers the dynamics well.

http://online.wsj.com/article/SB10001424052748703369704575461633570826898.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A great article from the WSJ that covers the dynamics well.</p>
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